Thursday, October 24, 2013

Story 3 (600 words)

There was once a guy named Jimmy. Jimmy liked to go out and party with his friends. He could never hold a steady job due to the fact that he would go to his jobs intoxicated. He didn’t care about anything other than himself. No one in his family mattered to him. He would neglect them all just to go out and party with his “friends.” The guys he considered his friends were all criminals that recently got out of jail. Each one of them was in jail for a different reason. The first guy Gary was in jail for killing the owner of a store. The second guy Billy was in jail for stealing a car and the last guy Fred was in jail for trying to rob a store. Jimmy didn’t know how he fit in with these guys, but he did. Then this one day Jimmy was with the boys at the bar and Fred told them that he needed to talk to them in private, so they went to the store and bought a 30 pack of beer. Then they went to Jimmy’s house because nobody lived with him. Jimmy knew that it must have been important due to the fact that they never met up anywhere besides the bar. Fred asked Jimmy if anyone would be able to hear him, and Jimmy said no because all his neighbors were out of town. This was good Fred said. Fred told Jimmy to get a chalkboard or a white board. Jimmy came back with a big white board that he found the one night when he was drunk walking around. Fred used this to his advantage and he made a quick little diagram. The diagram was of a big square. Everyone was confused at what it was. Fred put some windows a door and a name on the building. That’s when it clicked in everyone’s head. It was a drawing of the bank. This bank was a high end bank because it was recently robbed. Jimmy and the rest of the crew were a little nervous about this because they all knew Fred got pinched for trying to rob a store. If he couldn’t get away with robbing a store how could he get away with robbing a bank? That’s when Fred pulled out all of the bank records. It had names of people who have money in the bank. They figured out that in the bank there would be more than 100 million dollars. This is one of the most used banks in America. The only problem with this bank is everything is guarded by security. People can’t even go to the bathroom without getting checked by security. This really started to scare the guys. Fred had the idea of sending them all in to get jobs for the bank so they could have key cards to get in. Fred told Jimmy to get a job as a janitor. The janitor job would be perfect for him because he didn’t have to do too much. Fred told Gary and Billy to get jobs as security guards so they could let Jimmy slip by them. This is all they needed. Fred got some hidden cameras so they could get a good view of the inside. After Jimmy placed all the cameras Fred planed how to take everything out. The day finally came. Jimmy called off that day so he could drive Fred to the bank and they could get the money out of there. Jimmy and Fred ran into the bank and they pulled out their guns and put them on Gary and Billy to let them get passed the wall. After they got into the safe they let Gary and Billy grab money. They loaded it all into 20 duffle bags of money. They ran out the door and there were 5 cop cars. They had the choice to either get arrested or try to run. They all started running and the cops gunned them down. The moral of the story. Don’t try to rob bank.

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